May 24, 2023
Richard Wenk, Writer of The Equalizer 1, 2, and 3, On The Lost Art Of Great Character Work

My personal favorite working screenwriter, Richard Wenk, who wrote Denzel Washington's The Equalizer films (1, 2, and the upcoming 3rd film with Dakota Fanning), joins the show to discuss the incredible power of writing great stories by starting and...
My personal favorite working screenwriter, Richard Wenk, who wrote Denzel Washington's The Equalizer films (1, 2, and the upcoming 3rd film with Dakota Fanning), joins the show to discuss the incredible power of writing great stories by starting and ending with character. A real peek behind the curtain with an A-list screenwriter at the top of his game, on how he birthed a new franchise. If you're a writer, if you love Denzel Washington, if you love movies, you need to listen to this episode. Massive thanks to Richard for sharing his wisdom on the program.
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Voyage. Welcome to watch this tonight. I'm your host, Dan Bettimore.
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I'm a producer, writer of film
and television and now a podcast producer.
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And despite having every streaming service,
I never know what to watch. So
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anytime I watch something good, I
talk about it on this show. This
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way, you'll never have the same
problem I do. I watched this tonight.
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There's always something good to watch.
Let's get started, all right today
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on the show. I am incredibly
excited to welcome screenwriter Richard Wink to the
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program. Richard has written, amongst
many things, Sixteen Blocks, The Mechanic,
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all three Equalizer films, The Magnificent
Seven, The Protege, You've Got
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Fast, Charlie with James conn and
his final film coming up. Welcome to
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the show, Richard. Well,
thanks for having me and pleasure to be
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here. So I wanted to share
with you why I have. Like I
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I the first time I signed with
an agent myself as a writer, they
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were like, what what do you
want to do? Like, what's your
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dream career basically? And I was
like, I basically your career? Like
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literally I think at the time,
I think at the time Equalizer was just
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about to come out and I had
read the script. The script was sort
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of passed around, um, you
know, within you know, I came
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up with a lot of people who
were like assistance to lit agents and people
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like that, and I was a
development executive myself, so you could get
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your hands on the script. It
was your script, right and um.
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And I remember reading it. And
there's a moment in the first act of
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The Equalizer where Denzel's talking about the
hundred books, right and um. And
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he talks about that, you know, his wife passed away and he's reading
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them now. He didn't have time
before she died, and now he's reading
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them, and he says something effective. And I looked back at it.
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Actually, I wouldn't found him.
Look back at it. Something effective.
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It'll give us something to talk about. And I remember very vividly reading that.
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And for me, how I took
it was he's saying that when he
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dies and he sees her in the
afterlife, the thing that he didn't do
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while she was alive, he's doing
it now so that he can see her
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in the afterlife and be able to
talk to her about it. Right.
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And I was so moved by that, and I thought it was so beautiful
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and it's not like it's in a
way and this is going to sound like
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a really harsh indictment of where we're
at now in film, but in a
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way, it's kind of everything that's
missing for me and the majority of films
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now in the sort of action thriller
space is that kind of soul and that
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kind of like real like care to
character and so anyway, it just had
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such a profound I stopped reading the
script, like I read first thirty pages
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that it was so good. I
was like, I don't want to ruin
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it for myself and I'll just wait
and watch it when it comes out of
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a movie. But that was one
of the big things that I wanted to
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talk to you about. Is this
idea of the sort of invisible craft,
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right, is that, like,
that's what I find so impressive at your
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writing is that it's not anything flashy
or if it's calling attention to itself.
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It's just kind of good, clean, old fashioned craft. And the power
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of that it's it's it's all comes
through character. It's it's very difficult to
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write. I think we passed in
the eighties and maybe the mid nineties story
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movies, you know, where plot
drives the movie and action fits into the
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story and it's just you know,
some visceral stuff. What's interesting about the
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scene you bring up, which is
one of my favorite scenes, is that,
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Um, he never says his wife
died. She recognizes in his eyes
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that he's a widower because he doesn't
offer that, and that is that's the
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moment where he can with her,
because he doesn't really connect with many people,
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right. He's a sort of a
m a ronan and a guy,
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an isolating guy. UM. Very
charming and very fine, but he's got
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a past, and he's got which
we never explained, and he's got he's
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reading a book and he only tells
her that after she realizes that he's you
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know, because he's got a wedding
ring, so that she she was able
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to see past all that. UM
put her in that position where he opened
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up a little bit to her and
I was able to say that that line
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to her. He never says it
to anybody else. M The only other
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person in the movie that knows what
happened, um was Melissa Leo's character,
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Susan Plumber. So um Uh.
It's one of those things where the movie
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itself and here's maybe something that's interesting. I had have been offered The Equalizer
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five years earlier from another producer who
were named nameless because he's in prison,
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and I passed because I thought it
was a perfect television show. I thought,
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oh, you know, helping people
and all that other stuff, and
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I didn't really like the Jaguar anything
else. But five years later, Todd
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Black and Jason Blumenthal, Escape Artist, called and you know, mentioned that
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they had the rights to this and
would i'd be interested in and I said
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no. And he said, well, we actually worked with Denzel Washington and
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he's agreed to read it without an
offer. And I thought, oh,
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well, writing a script that Denzel
Washington will read, it's sort of a
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step up, isn't it. Right, So so you know, it was
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really basically a spec script. It
was basically And I said to them,
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I said, look, the only
thing I would keep from that that this
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project, which is the title.
I wouldn't keep anything else. I said,
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I think this is an origin story. I think it's a different character.
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I think it's I think it's it's
it's a character driven movie. But
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as Sony as as a Sony movie, you know, they want big movies
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and they want you know plot,
and they want, you know, big
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steaks. So what's interesting about when
you said that you read thirty pages and
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you stopped. You don't mind,
I'll tell you the story because it's kind
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of wild. So I started writing
the movie. In the first fifty pages
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are exactly what's in the movie,
right word for word, scene for scene,
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beat for beat. But then the
movie started as I was writing it,
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veering into the sony world of you
know, he's chasing an old nemesis,
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a terrorist or something or I can't
remember what it was. And I
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had written some really great scenes,
fall off your chair, scenes they call
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him. But it took me down
a path I just was bored with.
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And I also happened to watch Safe
House and I thought, hey, it's
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kind of the same movie. All
right, it's turning in the same movie.
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So I called the producers and I
said, I got to throw out
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these thirty five pages. I'm going
to keep the fifty. I'm going to
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start again from there on. Oh
you can't. They're the greatest and the
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best and so action. And I
don't know Denzel Washington at this point.
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I've never met him. I've never
spoken to him. I just know his
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movie. And I said, for
whatever reason, I said, I said,
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oh, I think he's going to
read the first fifty pages and love
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it, and then he's gonna get
the page fifty one. He's gonna throw
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it in the pile with all the
nose. And that kind of freaked him
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out a little bit. And they
said, all right, we'll tell you
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what. We'll make a deal with
You write it how you want to do
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it, but if we don't like
it, you have to put that stuff
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back in and finish it. I
said, okay, that's fair. So
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I wrote the movie as as you've
seen, as the script as as it
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is. That that kept the character
movie that I loved. So they got
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it. They liked it. They
liked it a lot, and they decided
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they gave it to Denzel. And
because my manager knows Denzel's agent and I
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got him his first job, I
got him his job as an agent,
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we were all waiting to see what
Denzel Washington would think of this script.
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And this is not I'm not making
any of this up, but yeah,
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he called my My agent called Denzel's
agent, said, well, what's happening
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and he said, he just called
me and he said, I'm on page
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fifty, tell me the next fifty
year just as good. And he said,
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they're better. And he read it
and called up Todd and said,
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Hi, this is Robert mccaull.
When do we art And and he goes,
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And by the way, it's not
a development deal, it's this is
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the script I'm shooting. So again, instinctually, you're right that we were
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in a we're in a we're losing
sight of the fact that most everything derives
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from character. And if you if
you care about the character, he can
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do anything. He can stick a
corkscrew in a guy's mouth and and uh
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and kill him and women will still
love him. And so it was a
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learning experience for me, you know. I there was my instincts at the
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time. I had just done expendables
to um uh and the mechanic um and
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uh, well they were they were
good scripts. UM. I was really
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looking to do something a little more
that had a little more uh depth to
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it, a little more meaning to
it, I guess is what I and
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I had read in the Wall Street
Journal did a gallop pole that published a
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gallop Pole then asked Americans to list
the five things that would make your life
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better and it was not. And
here's the answer. The answer was not
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health, it was not wealth,
it was not love. It was justice.
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And I thought, oh, that's
what this guy is. He's he's
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the guy you want living next door
to you when you can't do something about
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something, and he'll do it for
you. And that's a kind of a
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wish for filment movie. But you
imbew it with a real guy, a
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real guy who has a real past
and a real heartache and a real because
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violence is he knows secondhand. But
the other the dealing with his wife and
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his and the loss and the idea
that he doesn't know where to put himself.
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So the movie really is about binding
your purpose, right because by the
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end of the movie he realizes this
is what I can do, right.
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So you picked up on my favorite
scene, by the way, So yeah,
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you know, it's so interesting the
idea of writing for an actor.
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I remember I was hired to write
something for Ken Won Nabe. It was
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a Japanese company and the whole thing
was basically, we have to get Ken
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Won Nabe. I remember a certain
point I asked them, I said,
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what happens if Ken Wan Nabe doesn't
want to do it? And they said,
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well, we don't want to talk, we don't want to think about
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that. Yes, and by the
way, Kennon Abby said, no,
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we did not get made. But
it is interesting that, like, and
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for you as a writer too,
because I mean, obviously you're you were
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incredibly accomplished already by that point,
but even still, I would imagine when
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you sit down and like, it's
almost like do you have to shut that
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part of your brain off where you're
like, I'm writing it for Denzel,
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but I don't want it to like
I don't want to be paralyzed by that.
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I don't want to let it drive
too much of what I'm doing.
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Or is it the other way?
We were like, you're trying to learn
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about him and what he would be
into and your sense of him. I
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would say it's that it's the latter. Um, I'm not afraid of that.
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I in the Mechanic. They they
when I was brought onto the Mechanic,
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they had I think there were thirty
scripts over twenty years that they tried
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to do the Mechanic, and they
were they were all over them. I
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didn't read them, but I was
told, you know, he was in
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the army, he was this and
that. But I'm like, I don't
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know what was wrong with the first
movie. I just think you just need
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to update it, and you need
to, you know, make character.
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And one of the things that they
were running into was that they couldn't cast
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the Ben Foster role. It couldn't
get anybody. It was the script they
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had just that wasn't any even it
and again not making it up. They
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said, we really want Ben Foster
for this part. So I wrote the
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part for Ben Foster. I mean, I don't know him, I know
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his work, I know what he
can do, I know his what I
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see in him when I see in
the movies, and what I suspect he
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has in him. And so that's
what I wrote. I wrote a character
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that had enough depth and enough place
in the movie that he said yes.
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So I don't mind that. I
don't have any problem writing for somebody.
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In fact, sometimes it helps,
you know, it's funny, it makes
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me think of, you know,
in my little world. It's the smaller
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version of this. We had a
project where we could not cast exactly what
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you're describing, Ben Foster, the
second lead right right. We offered it
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to like ten people. They all
passed and Finally I said, all right,
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let's rewrite the introduction scene. We'll
leave the rest of it the same,
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but let's just rewrite the introduction scene. And it was a Western,
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but I basically did the scene from
The Godfather when James conn beats up the
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guy who's hidden woman. Right,
And even though this was a villain,
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that to introduce him that way with
a scene that you actually were kind of
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rooting for him. And the next
person we offered it to say yes,
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which was Round Probleman and he was
great in the movie. But yeah,
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it's so interesting that I think that
an underrated part of this, and obviously
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a great skill of yours, is
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say yes, right, bottom line, that's what runs the bottom line.
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There's the bottom line. And so
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can get to a place where you
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star to say yes, that is
an invaluable skill. And do you think
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that there's anything that people sort of
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that stars want to play the coolest
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want to play somebody who's not that
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a real person and they want to
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character. Also, they don't want
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the good actors, right, Um, you know, you don't see
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Denzel playing you know, other than
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he goes from plight to you know, unstoppable to this and that you
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know, he finds something that interests
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a lot of good actors, Tom
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Leonardo and all those, all those
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a part that that has depth and
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play the same guy. And that's
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We'll get Brad because he did we
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he goes, well, you're not
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to do it, and um,
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start to write a script, who's
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matter in the end, right,
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and it's got to be a good
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that's interesting in the world, that's
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be in it? Who's gonna play
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uh And if you don't think about
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disservice, I think, because it's
just the way the industry works. It's
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it is, it is what it
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they made in twenty twenty one.
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um. One of the writers was
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you know, anybody who works in our
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business notes that, like, you
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know what was in the script would
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watching that movie, which I was
very excited for it, and everything that
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didn't work about that movie to me
is everything that works about your writing,
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which is to say that that movie
felt impersonal money. I don't know what
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it was really like about underneath the
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character. And on the surface,
if you just tell somebody this is what
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happens in the movie, you'd think, well, why doesn't that work?
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That seems like that would work.
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lose their way with that stuff where
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about plot. It's white noise to
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a person, a real human being, you can take them anywhere and you
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can go through anything. But they
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cool stuff with nobody in it.
Just an empty movie in the end,
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right, because it was they focused
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it's that those those days again,
back in the eighties and the nineties were
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now that those movies did well.
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smarter today. They want to invest, they want to feel, they want
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to They want to be a part
of right. And they're not a part
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of like you know, heists and
things. They're they're part of human beings
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and why there's why this guy is
doing heist or why this guy is you
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know, working in home Mark and
all this stuff there's and by the way,
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the other the other thing that a
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don't have any mystery, and the
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with Antoine on all the movies,
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at all the test screenings and on
the first equalizer they tested at once and
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it scored so high that they it
was the highest R rated movie in Sony
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history. They locked it. But
when the focus group happened, one of
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their favorite things was they didn't know
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in the past, They didn't know
what happened to his wife. Did she
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get killed, did she died of
of of sickness? How long ago?
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All that stuff. They loved that
part of it because their imagination there,
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we've all experienced loss, we've all
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man with whose heart is broken so
in in that part of his life,
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so that they can identify with that, especially women. They were the highest
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scoring people and yet he was.
It was the most violent movie, you
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know, compared to most of the
movies I've done. So Antoine is genius
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at at at violent. It's in
action. Um. But yet the women
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forgave that part because of that.
So I think that when you when you
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do these movies, uh, and
they come to you and they say,
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hey, we want to do you
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none of us you know, have
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the human nature of the of their
lives, right. Um. They're their
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own personal issues and their own the
hurdles to overcome that we have to overcome.
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if you if you do forget it,
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you you you're you're You've done yourself. You're down on the ladder a
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little bit, and you're gonna it's
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the third Equalizer, Dakota has reunited
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it's like it really feels like of a
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piece with a lot of the stuff
that you've done. It's my one of
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my favorite movies, and Brian Heavilyn
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it was really remarkable to watch them
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also the history because there's a there's
a twist to her character that I don't
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think you see coming that connects everything. And so again, she could have
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been just a CIA agent working on
us, be part of the story and
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probably would have passed. But she
wasn't. Just that she was something else.
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So again, part of my job
is to make sure or try to
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make sure that there's there's things in
there, there's tasty things in there for
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them to hook onto and to play
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a lot of writers either forget or
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you get you know, those those
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and you just go, I can
I can stop this anywhere and pick it
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up anywhere. It's just I want
to make sure I touched on something you
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said earlier, which is about not
explaining everything. And you know, I
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mean I personally think this whole narrative
that like, oh, development executives give
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stupid notes or whatever is way overblown. And I you know, I've known
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a ton of really smart development executives, but I will say that a note
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that is very common that you'll get
from either producers you're working with or executives
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or whatever, is like, well, so can you so how come how
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come this happen? How come that
happen? Or should we make it more
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that? Yeah? And so how
do you sort of a key too that?
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Right? Because you don't want to
suddenly be like, well, let's
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have a scene or we explain why
this guy bought a pink shirt. You
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know, like let's say I'm going
to the store picking out the Well,
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I've been fortunate that a Equaliser was
a spec script, so they didn't have
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any say. They basically got a
script with a star and a budget and
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producers and do you want to make
it or not? And you know,
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God bless Denzel Washington and who said
that's I'm making that movie not don't don't
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start bucking with it. So um, same with the second one. They
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basically greenlit a develop you know,
the development of the second movie on the
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night of the test screening of the
first movie. And I had already in
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my head had seen realized that the
movie, if there was going to be
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And by the way, Denzel has
never done a sequel to anything and was
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not going to do a sequel to
Dequalizer. And except what he told me
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was, well, you know,
the only people are going to tell us
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anything of the audience that they want
to see him again. And I said,
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well, all all characters, all
most of the movies other than like
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A Mission Impossible James Bond, like
Born m I'm forgetting a few you want
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to see them again. Right,
It's not so much the story or the
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world or anything else. You want
to see Jason Bourne and what happens to
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him, and and and and that's
why you keep going back to see those
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movies, because they're so well done
in terms of character and in terms of
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investing in that character. So you
know that that's again, you know,
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every every studio wants a franchise,
every studio wants you know, uh,
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you know, a tent pole or
whatever that they can do, you know,
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three or four of them. Um. But you know, other than
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a Marvel movie, you you basically
you're you better write a character they want
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to see again. Um. And
that's that. That, fortunately, was
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what happened, you know, wasn't
in my mind. I had three in
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my head. I had three I
had. I had he finds his purpose,
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he finds his peace, and in
the third one he finds his place
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at home. So that was sort
of in my head. If I could
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tell this story in in in three
movies, that's how it would be.
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always happen that way. And it's
not because of anything much I did,
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other than I think people want to
see him. They want to see him
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do those things. They want to
see what happened to him and where he
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is now. I mean, he's
a limp driver now, right, doesn't
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even work at home, already destroyed
it. So where does he do now
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he's a limp driver. Well,
that's great because he gets to meet people
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in the backseat and he gets to
help people. So it's it's it's one
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of those things where in terms of
the studio executives. Yes, I got
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a lot of that on Craven because
that was assignment, and I just didn't
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do it. I just I just
I just didn't write it. And they
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kept saying, well, you know, we're gonna tell this back then I'm
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like, first of all, I
don't even like the character. We're gonna
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have to change the character. We're
gonna have to make them something different,
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you know, And I did.
I rewrote the mythology of Craven the Hunter.
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Um I got fired, I got
replaced. Let's say I got replaced
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on that movie by who knows how
many people. And I don't even know
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how the movie. It's coming out
this year, I think, so I'm
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interested to see what they did with
it. But um, I just didn't
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do it. I can't do it. I don't. I don't believe in
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it. And I don't think any
writer should write something because somebody said we
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need to have that. Because I
did get a lot of notes like that,
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what's the back where's their backstory?
Right, I'm like, I don't
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think I care about it. Backstory, Yeah, right, I don't know
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Jason Bourne's backstory till the final movie. Till the final scenes in the final
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movie. Yeah. Oh so,
and that kept me wanting to see more.
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thing I've I've talked about this show
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before about dad movies, movies that
your dad would would watch, and I
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would say, you're almost like the
king of dad movies. Stuff that you
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made. I think it's a good
thing. Okay, did your dad get
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to watch like when you as you
started to have success, did your get
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dad get to watch these movies that
you made? You got to see them?
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He got all the way up to
the first Equalizer. He was at
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the premiere in New York at Equalizer. So that that's that that meant a
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lot to me. You know,
he got to go to see sixteen Blocks,
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which is the white personal favorite movie
and uh an Equalizer. Um so
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he saw the you know, the
the progress that I made through the years
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as a screenwriter. That's bright.
Yeah yeah yeah. So as we um
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I was gonna, I had had
a question written down to say, oh,
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you know, it's pretty cool that
you managed to be the soul writer
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and all these movies and obviously mentioned
that you were U. It's interesting I've
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noticed I interviewed the guys who wrote
this Apple plus a movie called Sharper,
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and I asked them about rewrites and
you know, staying on the whole time,
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and because it's a big cast,
a lot of stars and stuff,
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and they were like, yeah,
Julianne Moore. They're like, that's the
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answer. Basically, Julianne Moore had
our back from day one. That's the
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reason that they shopped our script.
They didn't fuck with it. And I've
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heard this story again and again,
right the value of having your champion that
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nobody can mess with for you as
a writer, the value of that to
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you and getting your vision out there. I think there's more to it.
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I think that well. First of
all, I started out as a director,
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right I started directed Roger Carman movie, and then I directed an independent
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movie with Any Garcia and Any McDowell. So I immediately was already a collaborative
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kind of person. So I'm not
precious about anything I write. If the
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one has a better idea or bumping
for I would sit with Denzel on an
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equalizer every day for six weeks and
he would come to my little cardboard desk
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and he'd sit down and he'd pull
out the first draft. Now there's been
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four or five different drafts based on
budget and schedules and everything else. And
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he'd go through it and he'd say, you know what happened to this?
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And I said, well, they
didn't want to pay for the softball uniforms.
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He just got up out of his
chair and walked over there. He
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just came back, sat down and
said, it's okay, softball's back in
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it. And by the way,
I think there's so there's that, but
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there's also the idea that you're a
collaborative person. I think people can tell
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that you're not. A lot of
people are afraid of writers. That's why
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they're not on the sets. That's
not why they're not invited into the editing
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room or you know, having you
know anything. They feel they're precious about
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their stuff, and sometimes they should
be. Sometimes, you know, directors
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and and people will will mess with
their movie and it's bad choices. Um.
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But by most part, if you're
if you're a collaborative, you get
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to participate in that dialogue. So
I always would go to Denzel's house and
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sit there and we go to the
script and he would say, I don't
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understand this. How do I play
this? I say, well, I
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don't know how do you play that? And he goes, well, you
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can't play that. I said,
how do I play? I think this
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and I'm like this, and I'm
like oh, I said, well,
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that's really written for the studios,
so they understand it. You can do
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whatever you want, right, but
when I write it, so there's two
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scripts. There's a script that they
they read and they they read and they
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green light, and then there there's
a script that they made, So you
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have to understand that when you're writing
it. Like I don't say I write
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uh scripts, I write movies.
When I when you've read I guess Equalizer,
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it reads like a movie, doesn't
read like a script. I don't
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use a lot of exterior interior,
you know, those kind of things,
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cut twos and stuff like that.
It reads sort of like you know,
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I'm telling your story. It's very
clean. It's clean and visual and has
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visceral stuff in it, and the
fight, the action has emotion and it's
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clean and like you said, so, I'm thinking of it as a movie,
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not as a script. And I
used to write them as scripts.
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I used to write them as I
started out. You'd write these movies for
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the executives, just like the scripts. They read, and I realized I
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was just doing myself at the service
because they all read the same. Soon
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as you just say exterior Broadway,
everybody sees the same Broadway. But if
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you describe your Broadway right in a
different way and you don't say broadway,
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you say, you know the man
with the push card is going down the
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street, that the band with the
push guard is your is your slugline?
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I want to read, what does
that mean? Where is he? And
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then you suddenly realize he's in New
York City and he's so I think that
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that's a skill that people learn.
I just read a lot of scripts Coen
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Brothers, um m m knight.
I love his work. He uses no
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descriptions in his scripts, so I
kind of call from people, even William
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Goldman, who who is the king
of that right? You know? It
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basically reads like a movie. Yea. And so I realized that when you
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do yourself a serve when you start
writing him like final draft scripts, yea.
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And by the way, so that's
the movie that they that's the thing
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they get and they say, wow, this is a great movie. Let's
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let's let's get you know, Chris
Pratt to be in it. You know,
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and and then you have to go
back and you start making it into
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the you know, the the mechanical
version of it, right, who already
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to put in next two years and
they do all that for you. Yeah,
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but so there's two versions, and
don't be afraid of writing it that
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way because every executive, every studio
chief, and every per actor appreciates that
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reading something that's readable. Yeah,
it's opposed to things I've read. It
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just seems this looks like everything else
I've read it. So yeah, I
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think you know something you mentioned earlier, maybe as far as like working with
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the actors and stuff. It really
made me think of the most recent episode
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of Succession. There's a moment where
Ship is talking to her mom and she's
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a strange from her mom. She
hadn't seen her wife yes, and the
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mom comes up to her and she
goes, oh. A Ship kind of
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like reacts and it's like oh,
And basically what she's saying is, I
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can tell you're pregnant immediately. I
don't need you to tell me. I
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don't need you to do it.
Immediate's by looking at you, I can
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tell you're pregnant. And no,
no point in their conversation is the word
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pregnancy, baby, anything used,
And it's so like, you really have
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to have confidence in yourself as a
writer in the actors. But they can
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do that. They don't need you
to say, you know, like mom,
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I'm pregnant, right, Like,
so that of doing less, of
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the confidence to do less basically,
and also the confidence to listen to the
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actors. Again on the first Equalizer, Melissa Leo came in maybe three weeks
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into our shooting and came into the
came to the monitors and sat next to
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me, and she said, I
love the script and everything. I want
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to talk to you about something.
And I said, I know I have
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to do and she does if you
watch the movie, she I know I
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have to deliver all this exposition,
right, She yes, she's the one
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who basically tells us everything about Teddy
and Pushkin and all whatever that stuff is.
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And she goes, I just I
just would like it to feel because
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I know him more familiar. Right. That was her. That was her
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comment to me. And I went
home to my hotel and I rewrote that
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stuff right with that in my mind, and I sent it to her and
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I can't tell you how delighted she
was hugged me. That someone listened to
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her and did it and understood it. And that's my job, right,
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She's an Academy Award winning actress.
It's my job to listen to her.
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She instinctually is going, I can
say this, but it's it's pretty dry,
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and you're missing the fact that I've
worked with this man for you know,
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twenty years, so we don't have
to say it like this. I
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can say it very shorthandedly. And
so that's my You know, again,
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a lot of writers don't get that
opportunity. They're not around. You know
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that the movie goes on without them, and they shoot it and they change
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it and they do stuff, and
actors changed it and and you're not there.
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But if you get the opportunity to
be there, and if you are
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collaborative and not precious, that's the
other part of your job is so listen,
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right. The Denzel doesn't want to
say that I had a line I
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used and I had to take it
out of Equalizer and put it in Jack
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Reacher because he wouldn't say it.
And that was when they kept asking him
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who who are you and right?
And the answer was I'm the guy he
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didn't count them right, and he
said an that sounds like a Bruce Willis
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line. I said, no,
no, it's good, it's good.
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So he did it once and he
looked at me, said that's for you,
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but I do it again. It's
not in the movie, but it's
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it's in the opening scene in Jack
Reacher. Interesting. Yeah, so so
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you but you But but I listened. It wasn't like I got all hissy
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about it and said, you know, you're ruining the movie. You know,
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that's the great line and everything else, and it's like he doesn't want
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to say it. It's Denzel Washington. He's the greatest actor of the twentieth
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century. I think he would know
more than me. So before we wrap
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up, because I so appreciate your
time. I'm very excited obviously to see
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Budge with three, but I might
be equally excited, frankly, to see
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James Cohn's last role, because I
remember James conn before he died, he
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was interviewed and somebody asked him.
He was like, I just want one
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more, like I can really act, because you know, he had gotten
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to a point in his career were
just sort of doing low budget movies and
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you got the sense he wasn't getting
the opportunity. Have you You presumably have
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seen the movie Fast Charted and that's
his last performance, right, yes,
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wow. Um, I can tell
you that he's brilliant in it. I
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can tell you that it was tailor
made for him. I fought very hard.
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I want to say. Originally they
were trying to cajole Morgan Freeman to
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play the role. And I love
Morgan Freeman. In fact, I met
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with Morgan Freeman on sixteen Blocks when
we were going to make the most death
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character older and delightful. Man is
super smart. But I just kept feeling
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like, you know, he's coming
in for you know, a week,
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and you know I've seen him come
in for a week, and I think
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there's something more interestful. And I
suggested Jimmy Cohn. I didn't know what
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how his health was, and it
wasn't great. Um. And I just
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hung up yesterday with Pierce Brosnan,
who who saw the movie and loved it
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and was so touched by the scenes
between them. He's he's, it's it's
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I don't know. It's weirdly the
probably the perfect role for him at this
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time, because he was telling Pierce
he goes he said I'm headed to the
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dark side Pierce, and Pierce kept
saying, I think we should finish the
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movie and have some tea, and
you know, you know all the stuff.
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But he knew and yet that's part
of the character. That part of
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the character he had samentha and and
and um, you know, it was
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a almost a father son relationship.
Even though that Pierce was older, it
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was he was his like father figure. And um, he was so kind
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to a man who didn't remember that
or that. So he's he's just you're
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gonna love it. You're gonna love
seeing him in that movie. Um uh.
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It isn't one of those parts that
you go, oh, you know,
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it's one of those parts of Wow, I wish I wish he's still
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here. I wish he could do
some more. That's great, man,
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I mean you really that's cool.
Like you made his That's what he wanted.
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I mean explicitly said, he's like, before I die, I just
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want to do one more. I
really get to act. So I'm so
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glad you know you're able to do
that for him. It's great. Yeah,
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yeah, it was wonderful to watch
him and it's just fantastic. Richard.
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I don't want to take up any
more your time, man, I
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really really appreciate it. That is
the show for today. I don't need
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to tell anybody that Equalija three's coming
out. I'm sure people will be aware
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of it of So yeah, thank
you so much for coming on the show.
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And that is the podcast for today. Thank you for having me.
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M m m h, m hm
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Voyage. Welcome to watch this tonight. I'm your host, Dan Bettimore.
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I'm a producer, writer of film
and television and now a podcast producer.
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And despite having every streaming service,
I never know what to watch. So
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anytime I watch something good, I
talk about it on this show. This
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way, you'll never have the same
problem I do. I watched this tonight.
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There's always something good to watch.
Let's get started, all right today
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on the show. I am incredibly
excited to welcome screenwriter Richard Wink to the
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program. Richard has written, amongst
many things, Sixteen Blocks, The Mechanic,
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all three Equalizer films, The Magnificent
Seven, The Protege, You've Got
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Fast, Charlie with James conn and
his final film coming up. Welcome to
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the show, Richard. Well,
thanks for having me and pleasure to be
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here. So I wanted to share
with you why I have. Like I
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I the first time I signed with
an agent myself as a writer, they
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were like, what what do you
want to do? Like, what's your
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dream career basically? And I was
like, I basically your career? Like
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literally I think at the time,
I think at the time Equalizer was just
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about to come out and I had
read the script. The script was sort
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of passed around, um, you
know, within you know, I came
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up with a lot of people who
were like assistance to lit agents and people
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like that, and I was a
development executive myself, so you could get
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your hands on the script. It
was your script, right and um.
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And I remember reading it. And
there's a moment in the first act of
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The Equalizer where Denzel's talking about the
hundred books, right and um. And
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he talks about that, you know, his wife passed away and he's reading
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them now. He didn't have time
before she died, and now he's reading
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them, and he says something effective. And I looked back at it.
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Actually, I wouldn't found him.
Look back at it. Something effective.
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It'll give us something to talk about. And I remember very vividly reading that.
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And for me, how I took
it was he's saying that when he
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dies and he sees her in the
afterlife, the thing that he didn't do
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while she was alive, he's doing
it now so that he can see her
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in the afterlife and be able to
talk to her about it. Right.
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And I was so moved by that, and I thought it was so beautiful
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and it's not like it's in a
way and this is going to sound like
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a really harsh indictment of where we're
at now in film, but in a
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way, it's kind of everything that's
missing for me and the majority of films
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now in the sort of action thriller
space is that kind of soul and that
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kind of like real like care to
character and so anyway, it just had
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such a profound I stopped reading the
script, like I read first thirty pages
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that it was so good. I
was like, I don't want to ruin
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it for myself and I'll just wait
and watch it when it comes out of
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a movie. But that was one
of the big things that I wanted to
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talk to you about. Is this
idea of the sort of invisible craft,
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right, is that, like,
that's what I find so impressive at your
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writing is that it's not anything flashy
or if it's calling attention to itself.
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It's just kind of good, clean, old fashioned craft. And the power
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of that it's it's it's all comes
through character. It's it's very difficult to
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write. I think we passed in
the eighties and maybe the mid nineties story
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movies, you know, where plot
drives the movie and action fits into the
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story and it's just you know,
some visceral stuff. What's interesting about the
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scene you bring up, which is
one of my favorite scenes, is that,
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moment where he can with her,
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an isolating guy. UM. Very
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a past, and he's got which
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reading a book and he only tells
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to her. He never says it
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person in the movie that knows what
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itself and here's maybe something that's interesting. I had have been offered The Equalizer
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five years earlier from another producer who
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oh, you know, helping people
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I didn't really like the Jaguar anything
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they had the rights to this and
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no. And he said, well, we actually worked with Denzel Washington and
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he's agreed to read it without an
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well, writing a script that Denzel
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step up, isn't it. Right, So so you know, it was
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really basically a spec script. It
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as Sony as as a Sony movie, you know, they want big movies
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and they want you know plot,
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steaks. So what's interesting about when
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you stopped. You don't mind,
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of wild. So I started writing
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are exactly what's in the movie,
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beat for beat. But then the
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veering into the sony world of you
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a terrorist or something or I can't
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had written some really great scenes,
fall off your chair, scenes they call
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him. But it took me down
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House and I thought, hey, it's
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kind of the same movie. All
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these thirty five pages. I'm going
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start again from there on. Oh
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best and so action. And I
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movie. And I said, for
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oh, I think he's going to
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it, and then he's gonna get
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it in the pile with all the
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out a little bit. And they
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what. We'll make a deal with
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it, but if we don't like
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back in and finish it. I
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I wrote the movie as as you've
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is. That that kept the character
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it. They liked it. They
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they gave it to Denzel. And
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got him his first job, I
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we were all waiting to see what
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he called my My agent called Denzel's
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and he said, he just called
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fifty, tell me the next fifty
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they're better. And he read it
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Hi, this is Robert mccaull.
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the script I'm shooting. So again, instinctually, you're right that we were
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in a we're in a we're losing
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from character. And if you if
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do anything. He can stick a
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and kill him and women will still
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time. I had just done expendables
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uh, well they were they were
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looking to do something a little more
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gallop Pole then asked Americans to list
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better and it was not. And
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health, it was not wealth,
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the guy you want living next door
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something, and he'll do it for
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wish for filment movie. But you
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real guy who has a real past
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violence is he knows secondhand. But
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his and the loss and the idea
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end of the movie he realizes this
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you know, it's so interesting the
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I remember I was hired to write
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a Japanese company and the whole thing
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Won Nabe. I remember a certain
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what happens if Ken Wan Nabe doesn't
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that. Yes, and by the
way, Kennon Abby said, no,
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we did not get made. But
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for you as a writer too,
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incredibly accomplished already by that point,
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you sit down and like, it's
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part of your brain off where you're
like, I'm writing it for Denzel,
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but I don't want it to like
I don't want to be paralyzed by that.
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about him and what he would be
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they had I think there were thirty
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to do the Mechanic, and they
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didn't read them, but I was
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the army, he was this and
that. But I'm like, I don't
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know what was wrong with the first
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to update it, and you need
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the Ben Foster role. It couldn't
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had just that wasn't any even it
and again not making it up. They
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said, we really want Ben Foster
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part for Ben Foster. I mean, I don't know him, I know
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his work, I know what he
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see in him when I see in
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has in him. And so that's
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that had enough depth and enough place
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version of this. We had a
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you're describing, Ben Foster, the
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to like ten people. They all
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let's rewrite the introduction scene. We'll
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but let's just rewrite the introduction scene. And it was a Western,
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but I basically did the scene from
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guy who's hidden woman. Right,
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that to introduce him that way with
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rooting for him. And the next
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which was Round Probleman and he was
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it's so interesting that I think that
an underrated part of this, and obviously
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a great skill of yours, is
it's all predicated on getting the star to
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say yes, right, bottom line, that's what runs the bottom line.
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There's the bottom line. And so
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can get to a place where you
can write the role that will get the
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star to say yes, that is
an invaluable skill. And do you think
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that there's anything that people sort of
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that stars want to play the coolest
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want to play somebody who's not that
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a real person and they want to
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character. Also, they don't want
to play the same character, you know,
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the good actors, right, Um, you know, you don't see
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Denzel playing you know, other than
an Equalizer's trilogy. He basically you know,
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he goes from plight to you know, unstoppable to this and that you
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know, he finds something that interests
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a lot of good actors, Tom
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Leonardo and all those, all those
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a part that that has depth and
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play the same guy. And that's
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We'll get Brad because he did we
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he goes, well, you're not
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to do it, and um,
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start to write a script, who's
in it? Because that's all that's gonna
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matter in the end, right,
I mean, it's got to be good,
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and it's got to be a good
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it's got to have, you know, a story or the structure that
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that's interesting in the world, that's
interesting. But ultimately speaking, who's gonna
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be in it? Who's gonna play
this guy or that girl? And um
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uh And if you don't think about
that, um, you're doing yourself a
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disservice, I think, because it's
just the way the industry works. It's
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it is, it is what it
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they made in twenty twenty one.
It's called Without Remorse, and it was
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um. One of the writers was
Taylor Sheridan, directed by Stefano Soldim I
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was an incredible director, starring Michael
Jordan. A lot of really really talented
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people worked on this movie. And
you know, anybody who works in our
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business notes that, like, you
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know what was in the script would
change, all right, But I remember
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watching that movie, which I was
very excited for it, and everything that
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didn't work about that movie to me
is everything that works about your writing,
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which is to say that that movie
felt impersonal money. I don't know what
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it was really like about underneath the
plot. I had no investment in the
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character. And on the surface,
if you just tell somebody this is what
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happens in the movie, you'd think, well, why doesn't that work?
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lose their way with that stuff where
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about plot. It's white noise to
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a person, a real human being, you can take them anywhere and you
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can go through anything. But they
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cool stuff with nobody in it.
Just an empty movie in the end,
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right, because it was they focused
on that. And I just think
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it's that those those days again,
back in the eighties and the nineties were
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now that those movies did well.
Um, but I think the audiences are
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smarter today. They want to invest, they want to feel, they want
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to They want to be a part
of right. And they're not a part
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of like you know, heists and
things. They're they're part of human beings
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and why there's why this guy is
doing heist or why this guy is you
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know, working in home Mark and
all this stuff there's and by the way,
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the other the other thing that a
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don't have any mystery, and the
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set and to work with Denzel and work
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with Antoine on all the movies,
and been to the editing room and said
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at all the test screenings and on
the first equalizer they tested at once and
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it scored so high that they it
was the highest R rated movie in Sony
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history. They locked it. But
when the focus group happened, one of
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their favorite things was they didn't know
stuff. They didn't know what he did
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in the past, They didn't know
what happened to his wife. Did she
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get killed, did she died of
of of sickness? How long ago?
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All that stuff. They loved that
part of it because their imagination there,
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we've all experienced loss, we've all
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man with whose heart is broken so
in in that part of his life,
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so that they can identify with that, especially women. They were the highest
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scoring people and yet he was.
It was the most violent movie, you
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know, compared to most of the
movies I've done. So Antoine is genius
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at at at violent. It's in
action. Um. But yet the women
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forgave that part because of that.
So I think that when you when you
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do these movies, uh, and
they come to you and they say,
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hey, we want to do you
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none of us you know, have
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the human nature of the of their
lives, right. Um. They're their
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own personal issues and their own the
hurdles to overcome that we have to overcome.
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Um, you forget that. And
if you if you do forget it,
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you you you're you're You've done yourself. You're down on the ladder a
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little bit, and you're gonna it's
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the third Equalizer, Dakota has reunited
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with Denzel because Man on Fire is
totally a movie where if I blink,
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I just think you wrote it like
it's like it really feels like of a
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piece with a lot of the stuff
that you've done. It's my one of
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my favorite movies, and Brian Heavilyn
is one of my favorite writers. So
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it was really remarkable to watch them
together, the ease in which they and
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also the history because there's a there's
a twist to her character that I don't
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think you see coming that connects everything. And so again, she could have
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been just a CIA agent working on
us, be part of the story and
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probably would have passed. But she
wasn't. Just that she was something else.
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So again, part of my job
is to make sure or try to
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make sure that there's there's things in
there, there's tasty things in there for
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them to hook onto and to play
um. And it's the one thing that
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a lot of writers either forget or
don't do. And uh, and then
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you get you know, those those
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and you just go, I can
I can stop this anywhere and pick it
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up anywhere. It's just I want
to make sure I touched on something you
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said earlier, which is about not
explaining everything. And you know, I
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mean I personally think this whole narrative
that like, oh, development executives give
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stupid notes or whatever is way overblown. And I you know, I've known
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a ton of really smart development executives, but I will say that a note
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that is very common that you'll get
from either producers you're working with or executives
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or whatever, is like, well, so can you so how come how
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come this happen? How come that
happen? Or should we make it more
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that? Yeah? And so how
do you sort of a key too that?
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Right? Because you don't want to
suddenly be like, well, let's
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have a scene or we explain why
this guy bought a pink shirt. You
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know, like let's say I'm going
to the store picking out the Well,
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I've been fortunate that a Equaliser was
a spec script, so they didn't have
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any say. They basically got a
script with a star and a budget and
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producers and do you want to make
it or not? And you know,
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God bless Denzel Washington and who said
that's I'm making that movie not don't don't
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start bucking with it. So um, same with the second one. They
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basically greenlit a develop you know,
the development of the second movie on the
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night of the test screening of the
first movie. And I had already in
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my head had seen realized that the
movie, if there was going to be
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And by the way, Denzel has
never done a sequel to anything and was
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not going to do a sequel to
Dequalizer. And except what he told me
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was, well, you know,
the only people are going to tell us
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anything of the audience that they want
to see him again. And I said,
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well, all all characters, all
most of the movies other than like
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A Mission Impossible James Bond, like
Born m I'm forgetting a few you want
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to see them again. Right,
It's not so much the story or the
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world or anything else. You want
to see Jason Bourne and what happens to
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him, and and and and that's
why you keep going back to see those
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movies, because they're so well done
in terms of character and in terms of
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investing in that character. So you
know that that's again, you know,
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every every studio wants a franchise,
every studio wants you know, uh,
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you know, a tent pole or
whatever that they can do, you know,
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three or four of them. Um. But you know, other than
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a Marvel movie, you you basically
you're you better write a character they want
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to see again. Um. And
that's that. That, fortunately, was
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what happened, you know, wasn't
in my mind. I had three in
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my head. I had three I
had. I had he finds his purpose,
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he finds his peace, and in
the third one he finds his place
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at home. So that was sort
of in my head. If I could
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tell this story in in in three
movies, that's how it would be.
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And fortunately that's how it is.
Um, just got fortunate. They don't
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always happen that way. And it's
not because of anything much I did,
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other than I think people want to
see him. They want to see him
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do those things. They want to
see what happened to him and where he
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is now. I mean, he's
a limp driver now, right, doesn't
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even work at home, already destroyed
it. So where does he do now
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he's a limp driver. Well,
that's great because he gets to meet people
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in the backseat and he gets to
help people. So it's it's it's one
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of those things where in terms of
the studio executives. Yes, I got
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a lot of that on Craven because
that was assignment, and I just didn't
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do it. I just I just
I just didn't write it. And they
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kept saying, well, you know, we're gonna tell this back then I'm
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like, first of all, I
don't even like the character. We're gonna
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have to change the character. We're
gonna have to make them something different,
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you know, And I did.
I rewrote the mythology of Craven the Hunter.
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Um I got fired, I got
replaced. Let's say I got replaced
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on that movie by who knows how
many people. And I don't even know
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how the movie. It's coming out
this year, I think, so I'm
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interested to see what they did with
it. But um, I just didn't
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do it. I can't do it. I don't. I don't believe in
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it. And I don't think any
writer should write something because somebody said we
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need to have that. Because I
did get a lot of notes like that,
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what's the back where's their backstory?
Right, I'm like, I don't
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think I care about it. Backstory, Yeah, right, I don't know
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Jason Bourne's backstory till the final movie. Till the final scenes in the final
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movie. Yeah. Oh so,
and that kept me wanting to see more.
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Yeah. Um, I have this
thing I've I've talked about this show
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before about dad movies, movies that
your dad would would watch, and I
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would say, you're almost like the
king of dad movies. Stuff that you
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made. I think it's a good
thing. Okay, did your dad get
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to watch like when you as you
started to have success, did your get
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dad get to watch these movies that
you made? You got to see them?
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He got all the way up to
the first Equalizer. He was at
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the premiere in New York at Equalizer. So that that's that that meant a
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lot to me. You know,
he got to go to see sixteen Blocks,
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which is the white personal favorite movie
and uh an Equalizer. Um so
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he saw the you know, the
the progress that I made through the years
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as a screenwriter. That's bright.
Yeah yeah yeah. So as we um
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I was gonna, I had had
a question written down to say, oh,
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you know, it's pretty cool that
you managed to be the soul writer
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and all these movies and obviously mentioned
that you were U. It's interesting I've
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noticed I interviewed the guys who wrote
this Apple plus a movie called Sharper,
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and I asked them about rewrites and
you know, staying on the whole time,
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and because it's a big cast,
a lot of stars and stuff,
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and they were like, yeah,
Julianne Moore. They're like, that's the
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answer. Basically, Julianne Moore had
our back from day one. That's the
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reason that they shopped our script.
They didn't fuck with it. And I've
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heard this story again and again,
right the value of having your champion that
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nobody can mess with for you as
a writer, the value of that to
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you and getting your vision out there. I think there's more to it.
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I think that well. First of
all, I started out as a director,
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right I started directed Roger Carman movie, and then I directed an independent
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movie with Any Garcia and Any McDowell. So I immediately was already a collaborative
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kind of person. So I'm not
precious about anything I write. If the
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one has a better idea or bumping
for I would sit with Denzel on an
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equalizer every day for six weeks and
he would come to my little cardboard desk
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and he'd sit down and he'd pull
out the first draft. Now there's been
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four or five different drafts based on
budget and schedules and everything else. And
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he'd go through it and he'd say, you know what happened to this?
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And I said, well, they
didn't want to pay for the softball uniforms.
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He just got up out of his
chair and walked over there. He
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just came back, sat down and
said, it's okay, softball's back in
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it. And by the way,
I think there's so there's that, but
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there's also the idea that you're a
collaborative person. I think people can tell
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that you're not. A lot of
people are afraid of writers. That's why
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they're not on the sets. That's
not why they're not invited into the editing
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room or you know, having you
know anything. They feel they're precious about
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their stuff, and sometimes they should
be. Sometimes, you know, directors
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and and people will will mess with
their movie and it's bad choices. Um.
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But by most part, if you're
if you're a collaborative, you get
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to participate in that dialogue. So
I always would go to Denzel's house and
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sit there and we go to the
script and he would say, I don't
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understand this. How do I play
this? I say, well, I
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don't know how do you play that? And he goes, well, you
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can't play that. I said,
how do I play? I think this
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and I'm like this, and I'm
like oh, I said, well,
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that's really written for the studios,
so they understand it. You can do
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whatever you want, right, but
when I write it, so there's two
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scripts. There's a script that they
they read and they they read and they
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green light, and then there there's
a script that they made, So you
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have to understand that when you're writing
it. Like I don't say I write
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uh scripts, I write movies.
When I when you've read I guess Equalizer,
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it reads like a movie, doesn't
read like a script. I don't
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use a lot of exterior interior,
you know, those kind of things,
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cut twos and stuff like that.
It reads sort of like you know,
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I'm telling your story. It's very
clean. It's clean and visual and has
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visceral stuff in it, and the
fight, the action has emotion and it's
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clean and like you said, so, I'm thinking of it as a movie,
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not as a script. And I
used to write them as scripts.
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I used to write them as I
started out. You'd write these movies for
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the executives, just like the scripts. They read, and I realized I
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was just doing myself at the service
because they all read the same. Soon
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as you just say exterior Broadway,
everybody sees the same Broadway. But if
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you describe your Broadway right in a
different way and you don't say broadway,
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you say, you know the man
with the push card is going down the
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street, that the band with the
push guard is your is your slugline?
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I want to read, what does
that mean? Where is he? And
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then you suddenly realize he's in New
York City and he's so I think that
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that's a skill that people learn.
I just read a lot of scripts Coen
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Brothers, um m m knight.
I love his work. He uses no
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descriptions in his scripts, so I
kind of call from people, even William
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Goldman, who who is the king
of that right? You know? It
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basically reads like a movie. Yea. And so I realized that when you
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do yourself a serve when you start
writing him like final draft scripts, yea.
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And by the way, so that's
the movie that they that's the thing
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they get and they say, wow, this is a great movie. Let's
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let's let's get you know, Chris
Pratt to be in it. You know,
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and and then you have to go
back and you start making it into
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the you know, the the mechanical
version of it, right, who already
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to put in next two years and
they do all that for you. Yeah,
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but so there's two versions, and
don't be afraid of writing it that
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way because every executive, every studio
chief, and every per actor appreciates that
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reading something that's readable. Yeah,
it's opposed to things I've read. It
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just seems this looks like everything else
I've read it. So yeah, I
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think you know something you mentioned earlier, maybe as far as like working with
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the actors and stuff. It really
made me think of the most recent episode
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of Succession. There's a moment where
Ship is talking to her mom and she's
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a strange from her mom. She
hadn't seen her wife yes, and the
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mom comes up to her and she
goes, oh. A Ship kind of
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like reacts and it's like oh,
And basically what she's saying is, I
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can tell you're pregnant immediately. I
don't need you to tell me. I
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don't need you to do it.
Immediate's by looking at you, I can
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tell you're pregnant. And no,
no point in their conversation is the word
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pregnancy, baby, anything used,
And it's so like, you really have
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to have confidence in yourself as a
writer in the actors. But they can
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do that. They don't need you
to say, you know, like mom,
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I'm pregnant, right, Like,
so that of doing less, of
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the confidence to do less basically,
and also the confidence to listen to the
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actors. Again on the first Equalizer, Melissa Leo came in maybe three weeks
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into our shooting and came into the
came to the monitors and sat next to
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me, and she said, I
love the script and everything. I want
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to talk to you about something.
And I said, I know I have
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to do and she does if you
watch the movie, she I know I
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have to deliver all this exposition,
right, She yes, she's the one
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who basically tells us everything about Teddy
and Pushkin and all whatever that stuff is.
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And she goes, I just I
just would like it to feel because
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I know him more familiar. Right. That was her. That was her
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comment to me. And I went
home to my hotel and I rewrote that
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stuff right with that in my mind, and I sent it to her and
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I can't tell you how delighted she
was hugged me. That someone listened to
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her and did it and understood it. And that's my job, right,
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She's an Academy Award winning actress.
It's my job to listen to her.
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She instinctually is going, I can
say this, but it's it's pretty dry,
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and you're missing the fact that I've
worked with this man for you know,
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twenty years, so we don't have
to say it like this. I
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can say it very shorthandedly. And
so that's my You know, again,
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a lot of writers don't get that
opportunity. They're not around. You know
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that the movie goes on without them, and they shoot it and they change
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it and they do stuff, and
actors changed it and and you're not there.
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But if you get the opportunity to
be there, and if you are
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collaborative and not precious, that's the
other part of your job is so listen,
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right. The Denzel doesn't want to
say that I had a line I
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used and I had to take it
out of Equalizer and put it in Jack
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Reacher because he wouldn't say it.
And that was when they kept asking him
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who who are you and right?
And the answer was I'm the guy he
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didn't count them right, and he
said an that sounds like a Bruce Willis
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line. I said, no,
no, it's good, it's good.
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So he did it once and he
looked at me, said that's for you,
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but I do it again. It's
not in the movie, but it's
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it's in the opening scene in Jack
Reacher. Interesting. Yeah, so so
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you but you But but I listened. It wasn't like I got all hissy
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about it and said, you know, you're ruining the movie. You know,
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that's the great line and everything else, and it's like he doesn't want
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to say it. It's Denzel Washington. He's the greatest actor of the twentieth
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century. I think he would know
more than me. So before we wrap
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up, because I so appreciate your
time. I'm very excited obviously to see
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Budge with three, but I might
be equally excited, frankly, to see
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James Cohn's last role, because I
remember James conn before he died, he
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00:37:15.000 --> 00:37:16.639
was interviewed and somebody asked him.
He was like, I just want one
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more, like I can really act, because you know, he had gotten
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to a point in his career were
just sort of doing low budget movies and
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you got the sense he wasn't getting
the opportunity. Have you You presumably have
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seen the movie Fast Charted and that's
his last performance, right, yes,
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00:37:30.280 --> 00:37:34.679
wow. Um, I can tell
you that he's brilliant in it. I
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can tell you that it was tailor
made for him. I fought very hard.
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I want to say. Originally they
were trying to cajole Morgan Freeman to
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play the role. And I love
Morgan Freeman. In fact, I met
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with Morgan Freeman on sixteen Blocks when
we were going to make the most death
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00:38:00.559 --> 00:38:06.880
character older and delightful. Man is
super smart. But I just kept feeling
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like, you know, he's coming
in for you know, a week,
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and you know I've seen him come
in for a week, and I think
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there's something more interestful. And I
suggested Jimmy Cohn. I didn't know what
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how his health was, and it
wasn't great. Um. And I just
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hung up yesterday with Pierce Brosnan,
who who saw the movie and loved it
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00:38:30.880 --> 00:38:37.599
and was so touched by the scenes
between them. He's he's, it's it's
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I don't know. It's weirdly the
probably the perfect role for him at this
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time, because he was telling Pierce
he goes he said I'm headed to the
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00:38:45.960 --> 00:38:50.920
dark side Pierce, and Pierce kept
saying, I think we should finish the
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00:38:50.920 --> 00:38:52.519
movie and have some tea, and
you know, you know all the stuff.
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00:38:52.719 --> 00:38:58.760
But he knew and yet that's part
of the character. That part of
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the character he had samentha and and
and um, you know, it was
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a almost a father son relationship.
Even though that Pierce was older, it
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was he was his like father figure. And um, he was so kind
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to a man who didn't remember that
or that. So he's he's just you're
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gonna love it. You're gonna love
seeing him in that movie. Um uh.
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00:39:22.719 --> 00:39:27.039
It isn't one of those parts that
you go, oh, you know,
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00:39:27.119 --> 00:39:29.960
it's one of those parts of Wow, I wish I wish he's still
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here. I wish he could do
some more. That's great, man,
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00:39:31.440 --> 00:39:36.679
I mean you really that's cool.
Like you made his That's what he wanted.
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I mean explicitly said, he's like, before I die, I just
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want to do one more. I
really get to act. So I'm so
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glad you know you're able to do
that for him. It's great. Yeah,
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yeah, it was wonderful to watch
him and it's just fantastic. Richard.
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I don't want to take up any
more your time, man, I
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really really appreciate it. That is
the show for today. I don't need
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to tell anybody that Equalija three's coming
out. I'm sure people will be aware
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of it of So yeah, thank
you so much for coming on the show.
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And that is the podcast for today. Thank you for having me.
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